I was looking at flair on Facebook about and hour ago and I saw a flair I've seen many times. It just had writing that said "I called your boyfriend gay and he hit me wit his purse" Thanks to that flair this kinda just popped in my head... YAY for random name generators!
Critique for TheWrittenRevolution: [link]
Questions for TheWrittenRevolution:
I often give myself prompts and then try to write on them as best as I can. Do you think the idea I came up with for the prompt "I called your boyfriend gay and he hit me with his purse" is creative?
I don't give out a lot of information in this story, but do you think that what I do give is enough?
Since this is mainly dialogue do you think I used a good variety of dialogue words other than said?
Is there anything you see in this story that you think I could improve on?